First and foremost, the purpose of this mail is to highlight my extreme keen interest in seeking for a distributorship of your esteemed Tesla products, namely the sustainable energy solutions.
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Hence forth, a brief introduction of my company and myself. My name is Brian Leong, a Malaysian citizen stationed in Kuala Lumpur. I am an entrepreneur of my own company, Simply Orange Machinery Trading, trading in machinery and beauty products, namely ampoules and vials products mainly imported from China for more than 15 years. We would like to diversified our line of business.
I would really appreciate if your goodself could kindly grant me an opportunity to work with Tesla to further expand the horizons in Malaysia whose population stands at around 31 million, a high potential market for growth and in need of 'Go Green, Low Carbon Footprint' solutions that your company has to offer.
I do believe that with true passion and conviction, we can achieve our goals to make this word a better place.
Looking forward to a favourable reply soonest possible.
Thanks and regards,